Read the following passage by a Chinese student researcher. On the basis of the internal structure of English words and their meanings, in my opinion, this software aims to offer an effective tool on word-formation in English learning, teaching and researching. Drawing on the basic idea of English word formation, by the engineering practical query of sub-system and sub-module, I’m sure that it achieves the goal for the search of English words, roots and affixes, ultimately, completely presented a set of English word-formation pictures in the window of the users. Finally, if you demonstrate and investigate it on English learner, you will find that English word-formation software should apply to him and it is better for him learning word-formation and those engaging in teaching and studying English vocabulary. To some extent, I firmly believe English word-formation software is helpful to bridge the gap of the lack of national professional English applications. Questions: (1) Are there any violations against the stylistic requirements of research paper writing in the passage above? If any, what are they? (2) Can you work out a better version for the passage?