Discuss with your classmates whether there are any problems in the following letters and how you can improve them.Then contrast your improved letters with the original ones. To whom it may concern: I am writing this letter of recommendation on behalf of Mr.Chao at his request.He is searching for a job which will best benefit his personal advancement in the future. I began to know him in the fall of 2011.He impressed me as a diligent,capable and promising young man.Young as he was ,he successfully fulfilled his responsibilities.Besides,he was quick to adapt to customers ’ needs and clever in answering their questions.His work in the past two years has proved he is a good and promising worker. He was an earnest learner.He made a point of learning customer service.He was loved by customers. I strongly recommend Mr.Chao to you.I firmly believe he will bring success to whatever you ask him to do. Sincerely, Jenny Wright Human Resources Manager ABC company