Read the following cover letter and choose the right way to correct the mistakes. July 4, 2020 Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the post of Assistant to the Customer Service Manager of your company. Currently I am studying for a B.A. in Business Management at the Hong Kong University of Science and Technology. Subjects which I am studying are relevant to the post mentioned include Marketing, Business Management, Business Communication , Customer Service and Computer Local Area Network. I have held the post of secretary of the Student Union at my university. While organizing Student Union’s activities, I have improved my interpersonal skills and communication skills. In my junior year at this university, a passion for, and knowledge of horses created an opportunity for me to work for the Hong Kong Racing Museum. I am available for the interview at any time. I can be contacted most easily on the cell phone number given in my resume. I look forward to meeting you. Yours sincerely, Wu Fang
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称呼Dear Sir不妥当,应改为 Dear Sir or Madam,
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称呼Dear Sir不妥当,应该为具体的Dear Mr. (last name)
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第二段关于Computer Local Area Network的话题与所申请职位无关,删除或修改。
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第四段关于赛马的话题也与申请的职位无关,应该删除或修改。
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最后一段提到I can be contacted most easily on the cell phone number given in my resume,但是在上文中并未给出电话号码。可改为 I can be contacted at 135 XXXX 2558。